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Use Case: Write and Review Your VSL (Works with Fathom or Fireflies)

Write and review a filmable VSL script, with alternative openings and a filming checklist.

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Written by Victor Couto

🔌 Works best with your recordings. Connect Zoom, Fathom, or Fireflies and Jeremy AI pulls the transcript of your VSL take or sales call, no pasting. It only reads. Nothing to connect to try the sample.

Who it's for: coaches, course sellers, and agencies running a call or VSL funnel. That covers both first-timers and anyone whose VSL isn't converting. What you get: a filmable VSL script, a few alternative opening lines, a filming checklist, and a teleprompter version. You can also get a line-by-line critique of a script you already have.

What a VSL should cover

  1. Opening: say right away what you help with.

  2. Credibility: why you, using only facts you can back up.

  3. The offer: what's included, and the price.

  4. Common questions: answer the few your buyers raise most.

  5. A clear call to action (apply or book a call). Add real testimonials and your guarantee terms only if you have them.

Prompts (copy, paste, fill in the [brackets])

  1. Context: "Here's my offer: [what it is, price, who it's for, the result, proof/case studies, top 3 objections]. Don't ask me questions, just use this."

  2. Write: "Write my VSL script: an opening that says what I help with, why you should listen to me, what's included and the price, answers to my top 3 objections, and a clear CTA to book a call. Keep it conversational, in my voice."

  3. Hooks: "Give me a few alternative opening lines for this VSL."

  4. Film it: "Turn the final script into a filming checklist and teleprompter version."

  5. Review an existing VSL: "Review this VSL script [paste transcript]. Point out the weak lines and rewrite them. Flag anything that is unclear or that you can't back up." Optional extra: "Add a testimonial section and a guarantee close, using only the terms I give you."

Sample prompts (exact text from the walkthrough)

These are the exact sample prompts from the walkthrough. The business and every detail in them are SAMPLE and made up. Replace them with yours.

1. Context

Here's my offer: SAMPLE Ironfield Fitness Coaching, a 12-week 1:1 online coaching program for busy professionals aged 30 to 50 who want to lose fat and build strength. Price: $5,000, paid in full. Who it's for: people who can train 3 days a week and are ready to follow a plan. Not for: anyone with a medical condition that needs a doctor's clearance first. The result: a clear plan, weekly check-ins and a coach who holds you accountable. Proof: SAMPLE client story, a 41-year-old project manager who lost 18 pounds in 12 weeks and says he finally stayed consistent. Credibility: coaching since 2017, 4.8 average review score from 63 reviews (SAMPLE). Top 3 objections: "it costs too much", "I don't have time", "I've tried programs before and they didn't work". Don't ask me questions, just use this.

2. Write

Write my VSL script: an opening that says what I help with, why you should listen to me, what's included and the price, answers to my top 3 objections, and a clear CTA to book a call. Keep it conversational, in my voice.

3. Hooks

Give me a few alternative opening lines for this VSL.

4. Film it

Turn the final script into a filming checklist and teleprompter version.

What to expect (with a sample $5k fitness-coach offer)

  • Prompt 1 may return an offer critique rather than a script. It tends to point at gaps between your proof and your promise.

  • Prompt 2 returns a full script covering every section above.

  • Prompt 3 returns a few alternative opening lines.

  • Prompt 4 returns a filming checklist and a teleprompter version split into short lines.

  • Wording changes every run, so read each result before you use it.

Tips and caveats

  • Check every claim. Jeremy AI can invent details nobody gave it, such as a weekly time commitment. Swap in your real numbers before you film.

  • Give it your best proof story in prompt 1, because it builds the credibility section around that story.

  • To get testimonials and a guarantee into the script, ask for them, as in the optional prompt above.

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